Starfire: Kingdom on the Edge of Forever

Starfire Kingdom on the Edge of Forever Danizar is a young halfbreed beauty illegitimate daughter of the late Roran King and the Valent woman Eluna She has the self discipline of a Roran and the unique gifts of the Valent an ancient wisd

  • Title: Starfire: Kingdom on the Edge of Forever
  • Author: P.K. Brent
  • ISBN: null
  • Page: 439
  • Format: Kindle Edition
  • Danizar is a young, halfbreed beauty, illegitimate daughter of the late Roran King and the Valent woman Eluna She has the self discipline of a Roran and the unique gifts of the Valent, an ancient wisdom race Because of her mixed heritage, Danizar is an outsider to both the Valent and Roran cultures, which are distant and strange to each other Yet it falls to her, toDanizar is a young, halfbreed beauty, illegitimate daughter of the late Roran King and the Valent woman Eluna She has the self discipline of a Roran and the unique gifts of the Valent, an ancient wisdom race Because of her mixed heritage, Danizar is an outsider to both the Valent and Roran cultures, which are distant and strange to each other Yet it falls to her, to convince the Roran that the threat of the Zunit insect race is real, and to convince the Valent that they must work with the Roran if they are to win against the Zunit If Danizar fails, the galaxy will be lost.

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    1. Reviewed for Booked UpTo See Review at Booked UpThis book is about Danizer, a beautiful young woman who is the daughter of noble Valent and king Roran. Hated in the both worlds, she's had a difficult childhood, especially because Roran tried to kill or control her all her life. And now, on their last attempt, they are using the Planetary Coalition; I never understand what it was exactly because the writer doesn’t explain the term.What happens next is the race to catch her, which was quite bori [...]

    2. EDITEDITEDITMy advice to any indie author always boils to down that. The grammar, the spelling, the homonyms, the random characters name changes partway through a page These can all be fixed with a good edit or two. If you can't afford an editor, table the project until you can look at it with fresh eyes & do it yourself.That said There are the bones of a decent story and world build in this. It needs a lot of clean up, but the underlying idea has potential. Oh, and it needs to be finished. [...]

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