Finding Eden

Finding Eden Eden dreamed She dreamed of a man one with liquid gold eyes But when she meets Sahariel for the first time she can t help but wonder if she s going crazy People can see him but she can t see any col

  • Title: Finding Eden
  • Author: Camilla Beavers
  • ISBN: 9781300115519
  • Page: 133
  • Format: ebook
  • Eden dreamed She dreamed of a man, one with liquid gold eyes But when she meets Sahariel for the first time she can t help but wonder if she s going crazy People can see him, but she can t see any colors swirl around him, not like they do with other people Feeling irrevocably tied to him, she can t figure him out Even with her own eccentricities, Eden thought she hadEden dreamed She dreamed of a man, one with liquid gold eyes But when she meets Sahariel for the first time she can t help but wonder if she s going crazy People can see him, but she can t see any colors swirl around him, not like they do with other people Feeling irrevocably tied to him, she can t figure him out Even with her own eccentricities, Eden thought she had finally become somewhat normal, but once he stepped into her life, everything was changed.

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    1. I really disliked this book. It was so disjointed and confusing at times and the things that happened didn't really make sense. Eden waswell she just was crazy all the time, going off the handle for no reason it seems and making bad decisions constantly for reason that I can see. She starts hiding things from Saharied (which where they trying to make a love triangle with Marius? Even though Saharied disappeared from half the book because.well I don't know why he couldn't see her if he was not he [...]

    2. Rating - 3.5I got this book very randomly and i sure liked it.Anyone who like Fantasy should sure try it and i would recommend it to themi was sad to see there are very less review to it.It has Elves and Magic sure the fantasy has riled me up.ough a little bit predictable i really enjoyed the story more than i actually thought.Eden has been strange for all her lifeher mother has been dead when she was weeks old and her father is only one who is there for her.But whats strange is.e sees weird col [...]

    3. Okay, so the reason I didn't rate this book is because there are things I liked and things I didn't. 1) The author needs an editor immediately. 2) This book had a lot of potential but there wasn't enough action, suspense, or romance to make it a page turner. Good story line, I liked the main character (she wasn't really weak or winy), overall the book was okay and I'm sure the author will only improve from here : )

    4. "But I'm distracted every time Sahariel moves, as if I'm part of his ocean." (Except it said 'movies')"I don't want to cause him pain. In fact, I want to take it away, along with everything else. I want to take away his pride, his anger, happiness, joy, love, sadness, everything. I want him empty; devoid."Where do I start?Well, I would give this one and half stars because it did have potential.Typo city, this book was. Incorrect word usage, and bad grammar! It is important to proof read your wor [...]

    5. Finding Eden was a book that 1) sounded interesting and 2) was free, so I snagged it. It’s been sitting on my kindle for a while, but I finally got to it. And, I was left disappointed.First and foremost, the plot was very convoluted. Truly, this wouldn’t have been so bad if the book had been longer, but because of the shortness, Finding Eden ended up jumping from one thing to another. (view spoiler)[First, Eden is a loser who nobody talks to because she sees emotions. Then, she’s an elf. A [...]

    6. Unfortunately I didn't enjoy this book.The characters are seriously underdeveloped and make weird decisions without explanation. None of the book made any sense or seemed logical to me. The book also needs a lot of editing.

    7. Finding EdenI honestly have to say this book could, I'm sorry, NEEDED a lot of grammar check. There were many miss punctuation and words written the wrong way so I had to go back and read the sentence again to see who she was talking about (And don't call me dense because of that). The plot was good and it didn't take too long for Eden to believe what was the truth, which usually does for the other books I've read which takes up a large portion of the book. The ending left you thinking about wha [...]

    8. I started reading this book because the blurb sounded interesting and the cover is beautiful. That wasn't really enough. I had picked this up as a freebie off and I'm disappointed by the lack of editing in this novel. I had to read sentences multiple times to figure out what they meant, which got old fast. I wasn't able to complete the story. I'm disappointed about that. It's very rare for me to give up partially through a book, but until this book gets edited, I just can't do it. It's understa [...]

    9. I am going to guess the author is in their teens. With that assumption in mind, a hearty congratulations for finishing the story. There's a stark absence of world building and character development in Finding Eden. The Elf World is only described as going back in time where anything of industry comes undone and electricity doesn't work. But, somehow, beds still have mattresses and box springs. There's a war and we learned absolutely zero about the enemy. There's a queen but there's no ruling cou [...]

    10. A fun readEden is a teen that has the gift of seeing aura's or colors surrounding people. She ends up meeting the new boy in school and is shoved when she can't see his colors. Everyone has colors so why doesn't he? Things between them end but she finds out he is never far from her. Then she learns his secret that changes everything she thought she knew able it herself and her life. It was fun to read and keep me turning the pages! This book may contain grammar or spelling issues but it might ha [...]

    11. On one hand, the characters were very compelling, and I felt the emotion they felt. The writing flowed, and pulled me in.On the other hand, I found the plot weak. Maybe it was because the book was too short for a more complicated plot. I would recommend making the plot more complex, adding some mystery, and ensuring that hidden clues (not obvious clues)are laid out throughout the pages for readers who wish to solve the mystery with the main character. That way, in the end, the reader can say, "I [...]

    12. Is this author new to writing? Was there an editor involved?Okay I'm about half way through the book and I just have to say, I can appreciate where this story is trying to go. Like I like the idea and the actual story of it. That said, the awful grammatical errors and the way this is written it's so choppy If that explains it. I'm going to finish the book just because I love stories like this and I want to see where it's going, but it's hard to read it like this. Not a fan of this author I'd hav [...]

    13. Finding Eden, an elf story. The typical story, lovely and full of magic. I liked it, but it was too quick. The end was cut way too short, leaving a lot of things unsaid, unfinished. Eden went to school had a normal life, as normal as seeing people aura(colors) can get. But with the unexpected visit from Sahariel, the only person she can she his colors, she learns she's not only an elf, but the queen of them. She goes to this Elf world to save it from a war. There wasn't much more to it. It had t [...]

    14. The story wasnt bad, but I felt little unease by the way, which CB led the characters. The behaviors of main couple were many time too much direct or omitted and in whole - I was not able to believe them, in opposite to imho too many background characters without any deeper sense for a story.But I think, the author have a great potential (imagination and ideas are there, no doubt about it, just work out the technique):I apologize for mishaps in my spelling (I am not native speaker - I live in Cz [...]

    15. The book was good, but I believe the only reason that I kept reading it was because of the elves being the main characters. In my mind, the plot does not stick out at all, and the characters are only slightly interesting. What is good is the unique twist with the aura's, and that, again is only slightly interesting.Despite this, it is still good for a light read and I do recommend that you do so.

    16. Confused did the author mean to have the epilogue and the prologue backwards? because that was writer and there were several typos. But aside from those glaring mistakes the story was good and I enjoyed the book. Not to unique of an magical elf story very typical. Kinda boring with the whole danger plot thing one guy out for revenge and talk of a war with no real mention of who the enemy was. It was a nice story.

    17. So this book is going to be hard to write a review for. I really like this book I like the chemistry the main characters had I liked the story I really enjoyed the book ,however, there were a lot of scenes I felt needed to be longer I wish there was more to the ending. I even went to the author's page to see if this book was part of a series. Even though it had these problems for me I still really liked this book. I would give this book 3.5 stars.

    18. I just loved this book. It's about a young girl named Eden who is not your typical girl.She dreams of a young man named Sahariel who harshest color of liquid gold. Eden finds herself drawn to himrough her journey with Sahariel she learns about her fate in life and her soul mate. I couldn't put the book down and at the end I was left hoping for more of Eden and Sahariel's story in a second or third book.

    19. This would have been a good read if I could have gotten through the structure of the book. I mean every page, to the extent of almost every few paragraphs has typos in them. Missing words, wrong words, duplicate words. It started to become so much of a chore trying to put the thing in the right order I didn't even bother to finish.

    20. Great ideas but not quite thereI just finished this book and while in was reading I loved the way it was going. it is a great plot but it seems as if it was rushed out. I saw a few errors in it, though none were terrible. The ending isn't the best and was rushed out. I wish there was a second to this because it would be even greater to venture into edens new life

    21. The book needed to be written a few more times. The idea is great, but certain areas did not make sense and I felt a lot of the writing was written very quickly without much thought. The writing style wasn't one of my favorites. I wish the writer would have describe a bit more instead of letting the reader imagine everything.

    22. Well it was definitely a different kind of book. I'm not sure I've read a novel that strictly deals with elven creatures. I kind of expected it to be lame or bad but I seemed to enjoy it greatly. I would of been kick ass if it was made into a series.

    23. The hoof was ok, lots of typos and mispelled words. The book was a ok read. At the end everything happened to fist, for example, getting her first kiss from this guy to being pregnant and visiting the human world. I feel like it should be more detailed and to have a sequel.

    24. I loved the story line and the entire idea behind the book, it was a good book, the only thing I was really disappointed with was how rushed the story seemed about half way through until the end. It started to fall a little flat for me when it began rushing the story line but still a good read!

    25. eh. its good for a free book. the author should know epilogue is after the story and prologue is before. I did find one inconsistency in the book but over all a good read that isn't a series of fifty books.

    26. CuteThis is a really sweet elf story asides from the near death experiences. However every story needs some drama. I really liked this story the ending has me wanting more.

    27. WonderfulI couldn't put it down unless life demanded something of me. It was so good.If you haven't read this book you should.

    28. MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!! I want more. I can't wait to read the next in this series if I can get my hands on it!!! LOVE LOVE LOVE!!!!!!!!! Great characters, greater plot, greatest adventure!!!

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